Hi Room 2 Bloggers. I loved reading your Market Day stories, I liked how you told me which room i needed to go to and also how you made the suggestion I could use the relish on my sandwiches.I would like to place an order to purchase some of your relish. Maybe the next stories you put up on the Blog, you could include the size of the jar and the price I will be paying. I will also need to know the date and time of the Market Day, so I know which day to come along and at what time. Have fun making the relish.
Tony * We like how you have used capital letters at the start of your sentences *We like how you have used finger spaces between your words Wish:You could describe your relish a little bit more so we want to but it.
Lochlan- *We like how you have used the word smooth to describe your relish * We like how you have used full-stops at the end of each sentence Wish:You could try using some longer sentences to make it more exciting.
Hi Room 2 Bloggers. I loved reading your Market Day stories, I liked how you told me which room i needed to go to and also how you made the suggestion I could use the relish on my sandwiches.I would like to place an order to purchase some of your relish. Maybe the next stories you put up on the Blog, you could include the size of the jar and the price I will be paying. I will also need to know the date and time of the Market Day, so I know which day to come along and at what time. Have fun making the relish.
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ReplyDelete* We like how you have used capital letters at the start of your sentences
*We like how you have used finger spaces between your words
Wish:You could describe your relish a little bit more so we want to but it.
Lochlan-
ReplyDelete*We like how you have used the word smooth to describe your relish
* We like how you have used full-stops at the end of each sentence
Wish:You could try using some longer sentences to make it more exciting.